Hey ! This is very good ! I love your style and the animation is really well done ! The story too is pretty good :)
The actions are a bit too slow in general, but the animation is not so bad for a first one ! You need to perfect a little bit more the drawings.
Don't stop there, go on improving yourself ! :)
Thanks I apreciate your comment. Sure I will exercise and improve.
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